Monday, 3 June 2013

Disaster Writing

FIRE!!!! FIRE!!!! yelled Joe at the top of his voice, “What are you doing” replied Steve flicking his blond hair out of the way of his eyes “Its only a campfire” giggled Tom “But what do we do if it catchers the trees around us on fire”Joe Slowly Replied “Well we will just have keep it little” said Steve’s dad Geoff (One of the most ierer reasonable adults ever) quietly as they were not meant to have fires in the bush, But before they knew it they stocked up the fire so much that massive flames and embers were leaping into the sky sending smoke rising up to the clouds. The sun beamed down on the three kids and lanky adult as Geoff added more wood. The fire got so big that it caught one of the trees on fire and within 20 second the whole tree was in flames, Geoff turned around to see that the three kids were starting to run away and as Geoff was so dumb he just followed them laughing. If you want to know one thing that is the fire in way faster that three fat kids and one uncoordinated adult, and before long of running all four of them came to a stop puffing, but they had to keep moving as the fire was catching from tree to tree and was gaining on the. After another two minutes of running they all collapsed on the ground and the fire caught up to them and they died.

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